Week Three - 2

Outline -

So yesterday evening Michael and I video chatted and discussed the formulated plot in its entirety. While we did so, Michael typed an outline down on his computer so we had something tangible to work with in class and when filming. We also began brainstorming a title, but without further - a - do, here is our (rough) outline to our short film.

Title: * Disconnected *

Scene 1: *At school*
Main character and friend notice pretty girl in hall

Dialogue between main character and friend

School bell rings and they disperse 

Scene 2: *In City*
Walking home talking with friend about how main character wants to ask out girl

Dialogue between friend and main character


Scene 3: *Bedroom*
Both walk in

Main character lays on bed and friend lays on couch

Girl text message pops up on screen

Guy freaks out and friend jumps on bed

Scene 4: * Bedroom*
Main character texts girl back and starts conversation

Friend helps main character text girl

Conversation continues until guy asks out girl and she says yes 

Scene 5: * Bedroom*
Main character starts getting ready for date

Puts on a suit

Sits on bed and puts on virtual headset


Scene 6 - Date: *Vista View Park*
Montage of happy date

No audio of them talking

Just moving mouth and music in background

*Date ends*


Scene 7- *Bedroom*
Takes off goggles and smiles


Scene 8- *In city
Main character is walking on the sidewalk on his phone

Female main character is also walking on the sidewalk on her phone

Both walk passed one another and don't notice each other

*Scene ends*

We still have some refining to do towards the very end of the outline, since we are not very sure if
our message is delivered clearly. We want to highlight the everlasting disconnect created by this
technologically advanced world, and by showing the two characters stroll past each other without
noticing as if they were strangers really just emphasizes the disconnect from reality.


Thanks guys!